My Silly Music Video

We made this primarily to have a reason to put our music on youtube, but also because the idea makes us laugh. 2.5 minutes





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It's a concept very similar to one I had in film school.

It's cute, but you should have shot more angles on each moment. It would have allowed you to abbreviate the actions more. We really didn't have to sit through spreading the peanut butter for that long, or the two pieces of bread coming together on the sidewalk. Shooting just one angle allowed you no way to compress the action. Plus, your song is uptempo, and the sluggish storytelling didn't gel.

I would also have used some kind of image manipulation so it doesn't look quite so bland.


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