Sex Sells and Kids cant buy it

this is a news story i did on the Love Shack, a 12 store chain of tabacco and adult novalities.

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""" What you do with what you have, is more important than what you could do, with what you don't have."

> > > Knowledge + Action = Wisdom - J. Corbett 1992 """"

man, that guy just reeks of "SLIMEY"

as afar as the content goes, im not sure who your intended audience is but i think it was way, WAY too long. you could have told the whole story effectively in well under 3 min.

was compelling though.

i could have but that was our first news story of any significant value. i made it a bit long so that the viewer could get a grasp of the whole story. i didnt want to come off like i cut anything to sway the opinion of the viewer. thats what fox and cnn does. lol

i had already decided to cut all stories to less than 4.5 min. cause that was more of a mini doc than a news story.

""" What you do with what you have, is more important than what you could do, with what you don't have."

> > > Knowledge + Action = Wisdom - J. Corbett 1992 """"