That's really intertesting footage, Gene. How did you guys get so tight with the military? I'm surprised they let you film that. Off the top of my head, looking back, none of the editing stood out to me, which means I was too immersed in the story to notice the cuts.
What did stand out to me was the text, and the sound. I think the tone of the whole film could get pulled up a notch by adding more professional graphics and getting a sound guy to try and do something with the hollow interviews.
Apart from that, nicely done. I liked the way the story is built without any explanitory third party voice over.