I watched the video. I agree with Wayne and Mike that it makes no sense that you wouldn't host it on a proper page just because changes are being made. Just re-upload...if you want, use the same file name for the uploaded version so the media replaces itself.
The motion stuff is good, pretty kinetic, but I think you have two conflicting styles. The "old film" look, to me, jars with the very post-modern editing. I also think the black spaces just interfere with the energy. You got good shots and rhythm. Trust in your cuts, don't put black spaces where you don't need them. Why make your audience watch black when you can make them watch shots?
Also, there's a structural problem. There's no punchline. You also need a product shot if it's going to be a Gatorade spec commercial. I'm also not sure whether the freaky image of a girl dripping coloured sweat is flattering to the product...instead, maybe give her "Gatorade neon" glows and explosions to the points of impact when she hits the ball or stomps on the ground?
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