Yeah it's cute. A bit rough around the edges, but overall interesting.
My main concern is that you've used commercial music and this could get you into a lot of trouble. I think last time I looked here it was a $10,000 fine per incidence, so if you've got three songs, you're looking at a $30,000 fine if you get caught. Maybe try to find a composer who can do surf-style music.
The first panel with the four screens is not even around the edges - it makes it look amateur, which is not good for your opening image. I would spend some time making that work perfectly.
Love the archival footage. I could watch that stuff all day.