Recent Promos

I have put together a number of 5 & 10 sec spots for a new client.
I look forward to feedback.















Barry

The first spot I liked just fine, no real issues. The graphics on the second one looked a bit raggedy in terms of layout (a graphics expert like Joey would give more reliable notes there). A few cut points on the third one (such as the girl in the bikini) looked rough, as if you were so anxious to cut fast that the image didn't have time to resolve. I don't like the shot of the guy in the black T-shirt in the fourth one, though. Very blah compared to the rest of the images. I saw absolutely no compelling reason he should've been outdoors, yet in an unspecific location. As if he were in somebody's yard and you didn't want to see. There was enough background detail to make it strange, but not enough to make a statement.


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