- music was not my choice, and I had to stretch out the video to that pre-cut music track, so the middle is slightly repetitive, I agree.
- With the footage, I was also confined to what was given to me.
I am feeling like you turned it off halfway--which is okay, and tells me I should have done a better job making it worth viewing all the way through. The reason I do say this is that he speaks/reflect at the end and there is (I think, at least) a clear, linear arc of the season, culminating in a championship for him and his city.
- glad to see the lighting tricks and animation are okay-- but looks like I need to work on content, drama, character, and rhythm because its "not there."
Thanks for the feedback, Derek. I'll think about this more...